Category: Master-bation

#Satspanks Serena's asked for it...

9/27/2013

So hmm...wait...you've missed the last two snippets?? Again this one is from Sir's Deception my WIP.

9/14 Serena's in trouble which is the title of the chapter. This is the first book I have named chapters, but all my betas loved it.

9/21 Her tone was not one he liked

So you will recall she was egging him on after she got in trouble with her boss, he also texted her telling her she was in trouble and finally she was in physical trouble. Let's say not her day..and this is why our Dom, Max, hesitates on his prior verbal threat of following through on punishing her.

So she's feisty, why he calls her kitten, but normally she's never this blatant nor egging him on like this. So he told her to go to the kitchen counter. Right?? Hmm YUM! I love the growls...

Snippet:
The way he said it sent a sharp volt to her pussy. She turned around careful not to let him see the smile on her face. She wanted to be relieved of her guilt for all her misdeeds. She needed it and knew he was unsure due to earlier events. She stood at the end of the counter; the cold granite reflected her face. She dared not look at him, fearing she’d reveal her intentions.

Wooden utensils clattered before her. “Pick,” he demanded.

She chose a simple wooden spoon. What did it matter? Right?

He pushed gently on her shoulder blades and her cheek and breasts melded to the cold surface. Her nipples tightened through her thin blouse.

So sorry, just couldn't get to the fun part ladies...but wanted to show more of their relationship. And I'm waiting (giggling) for the responses about the wooden spoon...such a newbie Ms Serena is.

Be sure to click below for more hot snippets!!

This is the first book in the series!

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All #erotica doomed to be compared to #50SOG?

9/27/2013

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I was a bit annoyed (to say the very least) when someone compared my snippet. Yes, a mere spanking snippet from this book to 50SOG. I participate in #SatSpanks with some lovely authors and posted it on my Facebook page, and that is where I got this comment. I received some great support from other authors, however, it led me to think...are we (erotica authors) all doomed to be compared to 50 Shades of Grey?

And I guess the other thing I should mention is, I've never actually read that book so it's tough for me to say if it's anything like that or not.

I am big on the fact that each book should stand on it's on merit, I choose covers that are different; I try to be unique.

So here's a little about my book if you arel interested. The second in the series: "Sir's Deception" will be out very shortly and I am very excited about that!!

Master-bation, At Sir's Command (The Torn Series: Book 1) Join Max and Serena in this explicit book of fun, that involves pleasurable playing in a loving Dom/Sub relationship. She learns what it means to submit, something that she is clearly a natural at, despite her feisty nature.

A different excerpt:

He moved around to her, to the front of her and gripped a fistful of her soft brown hair. Lifting her head and her eyes mixed with tears and excitement, pupils dilated, he'd push her to the edge tonight.

A smile crossed her mouth and she licked her lips. His urgency and desire so eminent and she knew she'd be able to please him with her mouth if only for a moment. He teased her as he stayed just out of reach of her tongue; she strained and moaned in want. Her eyes roamed his desperately, questioning. Finally, he came slightly closer and she was able to taste the salty pre-come from his d*ck. It bounced up and came back and hit her lips. She wished she had use of her hands to pull him, force him into her mouth. She was able to get the head of his penis in before he pulled back and kissed her. It was like he dug inside her with his tongue and she began to feel a blinding white light surround her. Her head forced back, her legs and hands bound together behind her; it was a bizarre sensation, as he poured his breath into her lungs.

His hand slid to her breasts to help ease her gently back to the floor. You're gonna break her damn neck, easy Max. He was all riled up, just the sight of her desperately wanting to suck his c*ck made the blood that was not pounding like a jackhammer in his d*ck, race through his veins like the Indy
500. He released her and attempted to gain his breath, his composure. Her chest was also heaving hard, her skin glowed in multiple colors from the nightlights outside making her look like a garden fairy, well one ready to get the sh*t f*cked out of her. He roughly ran his hand over her shoulder, to the center of her back to that gorgeously luscious a**. He smacked it hard for good measure and slid his index and middle finger down. The vibe was still working its magic.

Ok Ok you want to read the snippet? Here it is...Click on the SatSpanks snippet. If you've read 50SOG let me know what you think in the comments below!

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#NEWRELEASE "Master-bation, At Sir's Command" First book of The Torn Series

8/20/2013

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I am so excited that this book has been so well received from just the cover so far. I'd like to give cover credit to satisfictionservices.com I really hope everyone enjoys it. I'm planning on making it a series to follow this couple. Max and Serena are in a loving D/s relationship. And a fairly new one, only 6 months being together by the end of this book. One difference this book has from anything else I have written is the Chapter titles. Initially, I had this as a book of shorts. However, after much hemming and hawing on my part, I fleshed it out and drew the story out a little more. And now I have a series so really as I always say, things happen for a reason. ;)

Excerpt from the "First time anal…dreaming" Chapter:

Max turned the vibe level down, he wanted to test her tonight. He slid it inside her pussy. “So wet my little pet.” He lightly smacked her pussy.

“Ahh! Yes sir,” she managed to strangle out. I’m gonna come already.

“Don’t come little slut.” Max got up, he smelled his hand and his dick thumped against his belly. He moved around to her, to the front of her and gripped a fistful of her soft brown hair. Lifting her head and her eyes mixed with tears and excitement, pupils dilated, he’d push her to the edge tonight.

A smile crossed her mouth and she licked her lips. His urgency and desire so eminent and she knew she’d be able to please him with her mouth if only for a moment. He teased her as he stayed just out of reach of her tongue; she strained and moaned in want. Her eyes roamed his desperately, questioning. Finally, he came slightly closer and she was able to taste the salty pre-come from his dick. It bounced up and came back and hit her lips. She wished she had use of her hands to pull him, force him into her mouth. She was able to get the head of his penis in before he pulled back and kissed her. It was like he dug inside her with his tongue and she began to feel a blinding white light surround her. Her head forced back, her legs and hands bound together behind her; it was a bizarre sensation, as he poured his breath into her lungs.

His hand slid to her breasts to help ease her gently back to the floor. You’re gonna break her damn neck, easy Max. He was all riled up, just the sight of her desperately wanting to suck his cock made the blood that was not pounding like a jackhammer in his dick, race through his veins like the Indy 500. He released her and attempted to gain his breath, his composure. Her chest was also heaving hard, her skin glowed in multiple colors from the nightlights outside making her look like a garden fairy, well one ready to get the shit fucked out of her. He roughly ran his hand over her shoulder, to the center of her back to that gorgeously luscious ass. He smacked it hard for good measure and slid his index and middle finger down. The vibe was still working its magic.

“Still holding on my pet?”

“Yes…” she gulped, “sir.” Her voice was trembling and he was going to help her, he knew she was in that space already. He loved how little he had to do to her to get her there, sometimes though, he wished for more. It would take time and patience.

He moved to her ass and began by circling that rosebud with his tongue, getting closer and closer to the center. He forced his tongue in hard and watched her nails dig into her palms. He bit her anus gently; watched as her rectum tightened and released.

“Oh my god!” Serena hadn’t expected that, no one had ever done that to her. She was unsure if she could not only hold her orgasm from exploding within her or even just hold the vibe. Her pussy flooded with juices, as her level of arousal went even higher then she had ever thought was imaginable.

He spit on her anus with a loud noise. He rubbed it around and pushed his fingertip in, slowly and both of them made noises simultaneously as he delved deeper. Her sweet and musky scent was making it harder for him to keep control, but he didn’t want to hurt her, and he promised her anal sex. And he promised himself. “So tight beautiful,” he commented.

Guttural noises emanated from her throat, as he was fully inside her with his index finger. The muscles contracted all along his finger, he couldn’t wait until that was his dick. Next, he pressed two fingers inside, adding even more spit and repeating the process. Stretching her, preparing her; this time he moved in and out. Slow and steady, working up a rhythm until the visual was too much for him. Fuck this. I need to stretch her the rest of the way myself. She told me herself she’s had anal sex.

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#Satspanks Serena's asked for it...

All #erotica doomed to be compared to #50SOG?

#NEWRELEASE "Master-bation, At Sir's Command" First book of The Torn Series

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