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#SatSpanks #EroticFantasies free anthology #rafflecopter Does BLUE BIRD get her spanking? #excerpt

3/21/2014

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This is from my piece Blue Bird out of the Erotic Fantasies Anthology. If you haven't grabbed it yet I urge you to do so.

So if you missed last week here is the link CLICK HERE!  So now what will this little cock tease get? After all she just wants to do is please him...
 Before I even finished, he flipped me over and turned up my dress, tugging my panties down. His elbow pressed firmly into my back, locking me in place.

“Oh, my god!” I squealed.

Smack!

“Fuck!” The sting of the cold made the slap so much worse. “Sir, please.”

Smack!

“I don’t want to hear it. I did tell you no teasing, and I was adamant that there was going to be no sex tonight.”

His cruel hand came crashing down again, and the pain burnt my skin, as the sixth and seventh cracks came down.

“Please, sir. Please!” I cried. “I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to tease you. Please let me fix it. Please.”

His hand rubbed on my sore bottom, which I was sure shone like a beacon in the dark night. Rudolph would surely be outshone by this one.

My panting and tears were echoing off the water. As I stilled, I could hear the frogs again, while I whimpered lightly on his lap.

Sir pulled me up and brought my face to his; I expected anger, but he seemed softer. His eyes appeared darker, and made my lips drip with moisture – both pairs of them.

Yep, waaaaay over the limit this week. I'll be waiting in the corner.



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Book Description:
Step into the pages of several short stories that are sure to whet your appetite and stir your imagination. All things are possible within the dark corners of our mind where fantasies take shape just for our own entertainment. Eleven different stories will take your mind on an erotic journey and arouse your deepest desires. Your body and mind will tingle with delight and your toes will curl as you find that you lose yourself in every story. The authors hope you enjoy their stories and visit their websites where you can learn about the rest of their books.
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20 Comments
Natasha Knight link
3/21/2014 06:58:36 pm

I think you like it in the corner anyway, Suzy. :) I liked your sentences and it didn't feel like you went over - it jut flowed beautifully. It normally takes me a minute to get into first person but this was so so well done, I barely noticed it and enjoyed it thoroughly!

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Suzy
3/23/2014 10:12:37 am

Thanks Natasha. I dont normally write in first person ;) sometimes a piece calls for it I guess. ;) I hope people like it. I loved writing it.

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Suzy
3/23/2014 10:13:38 am

oh and the corner lol, perhaps

Cara Bristol link
3/21/2014 10:22:36 pm

I agree with Natasha -- this snippet flowed beautifully. Very smooth. And I was intrigued by the mention of water. Are they on a boat? A dock? I liked the mention of the frogs.

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Suzy
3/23/2014 10:14:38 am

Yes they are at a beach. I used the image of one that I grew up near. ;) I like to use real life places. shhh don't tell

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Leigh Smith
3/21/2014 10:39:34 pm

Teasing does have its benefits, doesn't it?

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Suzy
3/23/2014 10:15:24 am

Sometimes, benefits and well drawbacks. haha Not sure which this falls into of those two.

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Joseph McNamara link
3/21/2014 11:19:36 pm

Sounds like, even with the angst of his cruel hand, and the pleas to do anything to fix it, she is still somewhat embraced in the "lips dripping in moisture" -both pair... engaging scene for the reader...

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Daizie Draper link
3/22/2014 08:45:14 am

Wow. Fantastic, moving from fierce to tender is always a glorious journey.

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Suzy
3/23/2014 10:16:38 am

Yes, they took their time to get to know each other before their first meet. ;) She's somewhat intoxicated with him. It's his next words that keep her truly off balance.

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John Satisfy link
3/22/2014 12:58:35 am

What a great snippet, but what else could we expect from you?

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Suzy
3/23/2014 10:17:13 am

Thanks John. I hope you grabbed yourself a copy. ;)

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Joelle Casteel link
3/22/2014 01:36:00 am

oo corner time :) that was a wonderful snippet, so well worth the corner time :D I love how she sees him after the spanking, when he's relaxed :) lovely

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Suzy
3/23/2014 10:17:58 am

Aww thanks Joelle ;) Eyes are a big thing in my writing. I think they convey a lot.

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Ashe Barker link
3/22/2014 02:42:20 am

I love this. I love the way he softens afterwards, and how she responds to it. Intriguing location too - chilly, water, frogs, the outdoors

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Suzy
3/23/2014 10:18:41 am

Thanks Ashe...Hmm nothing better than the outdoors. Erm did I just write that. LOL

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Etta Stark link
3/22/2014 03:36:26 am

Ha! I was just getting to the end of that thinking "That's way more than 8 sentences, surely?" but you totally owned up to it. I hope you appreciate the seriousness of your offence :)

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Suzy
3/23/2014 10:19:35 am

Well Mistress Blake has yet to come and give me my punishment but I will be waiting, bottoms up. ;)

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Sadie Dane link
3/23/2014 06:51:36 am

"Rudolph would surely be outshone by this one." Heehee! I loved this line. I didn't even notice you went over, opposite to that!

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Suzy
3/23/2014 10:20:15 am

Well good, that means I drew you in. I am glad. Thanks for stopping over. Suzy

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