I believe most of the spanking hoppers will enjoy this and so far I have had enormous love on this piece from my critique partners. Funny thing is there is more story and less BDSM elements. It is a D/s love story of course. I try to offer different things in each story. Quite honestly, if you know me at all, I never plan what comes out of my head. It's like those people with no filter on their mouths...how I feel about my brain sometimes. ;)
Feeling ill at the beach, my little blue bird here is getting back in his car. He is taking her to her own car back at the bar. That is where they initially met for the evening.
I watched, as he gently closed the door and I stared out of the window. I stared in complete silence the short distance back to my car. I got out without a word and walked swiftly to my car, which was across the street in another parking lot. I didn’t want to let him see me upset.
Fool. I sat in my car a few minutes, trying to gather myself, wiping tears from my cheeks.
Text message: If you are quite finished, please get out and come say goodbye like a proper lady.